Inside March 15, 2005's Issue

Anna K. Davie Elementary student writing samples

A beautiful butterfly flying through the baseball field
By Lauren Tutt, Fourth Grade

I see a beautiful butterfly flying through the baseball field. The audience is amazed by the colors. Blue and yellow what beautiful colors. In the field I was up next. But then I seen that butterfly and I started to stare at it. I was amazed by its beautiful colors blue and yellow. �You have two strikes out!� my coach yelled. My teammates yell �C'mon you can do it hit this one we will win the game if you hit this one!� I did not listen. They through the ball I didn't hit. I was keeping my eye on the butterfly instead of the ball. We lost the game but I suddenly came to my beautiful butterfly. Oh my beautiful butterfly.

Ox
By Rontavious Coley, Third Grade

Ox, Ox, are you buff?
Or are you tuff?
Ruff is your name, do you burn in a flame?
Do you sting? Are you mean? Do thy that say when you have lead a cattle were you in a tough battle?
Are you fierce with the ears that are pierce.

River
By Monay Turner, Third Grade

The river is cool like jazz. The river is cold as ice. The river is as green as a fresh grown leaf. The river moves like a turtle. The water of the river is like lemon on a hot summer day. The river. The river.

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